Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted April 14, 2009 Chapters: 1 2 -3- 4... 


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a contemplative triolet

A chapter in the book Triolets: Traditional and Modified

Hearts in True Communion Meet

by adewpearl


When hearts in true communion meet,
there are no barriers too high,
no hurdles built they won't defeat,
when hearts in true communion meet.
No hindrance known will cause retreat,
nor hardship love cannot defy.
When hearts in true communion meet,
there are no barriers too high.





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My thanks to Angelheart for this wonderful art - as I was searching for a hurdle, barrier, wall, I found this picture of a wall with the words "The more caring you bring to the world, the less room there is for hate." This is precisely the theme of my triolet, which is not necessarily about romantic love shared by two people but about the power of love in the world.
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