Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 28, 2009


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a septolet

Thar She Blows

by adewpearl


Whales sing
their songs
and dive
for krill.

Harpoons,
at ready,
aim to kill.




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The septolet is a poem of 14 words divided into 7 lines. Each section forms a part of the same picture from a different perspective, usually with some tension or irony between the two parts.
Krill are schools of tiny shrimp-like crustaceons that whales feed on.
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