Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 11, 2009


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tides

by adewpearl



When tides are finished raging
upon the battered shore,
rich treasures they deposit,
once hid on ocean's floor.

With delicate translucence
will fragile shells give light
free passage through their whiteness --
a most resplendent sight.

But sights like these are fleeting
upon the sun-drenched sand,
for soon the sea retrieves them
to hide them once again.






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