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A minute poem about sailing

A chapter in the book The Minute Poem

Serenity

by adewpearl



Far past the grasp of life's concerns
is where I yearn
to sail away --
beyond the fray.

If only I'd horizon find
where sky meets mind --
and atmosphere
is pure and clear.

I needn't spend eternity
in distant sea --
just one calm day
is all I pray.




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One meaning of horizon is the line where earth and sky appear to meet. Another meaning is "the limit of mental perception."
I have blended them here. Similarly, atmosphere can be the air in the sky or the mood of a situation. Again, I've blended them.
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