Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted February 27, 2009 Chapters:  ...31 32 -33- 34... 


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Temporary Setback

by adewpearl


Black disc
in morning sky --
the sun obscured from sight,
until the light comes shining bright
again.




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shining bright or shining back
Dear fellow writers, I'd really appreciate if you'd weigh in on which you like better as I keep going back and forth. :-) Brooke
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