General Poetry posted February 25, 2009 |
My first Haiku - Hell has indeed frozen over
(balmy breezes blow)
by adewpearl
balmy breezes blow dandelion parachutes breath of God spreads life |
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I have no idea if haiku rules dictate I'm supposed to use lower case for God, but that ain't gonna happen!
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