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minute poem about a kiss long ago

A chapter in the book The Minute Poem

First Kiss

by adewpearl



The Doors played on the Radio --
he drew me slow
into his kiss,
impassioned bliss.

While "Touch Me Babe" with steady beat
turned up the heat,
our warm lips met --
love's first duet.

Outside his car the night grew cold --
but truth be told,
as ardor grew,
we never knew.




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The minute poem consists of three quatrains, each one of 8/4/4/4 syllables in iambic meter. The rhyme scheme is of rhyming couplets.
This kiss took place in an old Dodge Dart in December of 1968 in the parking lot of the King of Prussia Shopping Mall. We were both teenagers, and I went on to marry this boy who gave me my first kiss. When this song plays on the oldies station, I still remember it all as if it were yesterday. :-)
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