Biographical Poetry posted November 24, 2008 |
reflections on a box of baby clothes
The Memory Box
by adewpearl
Contest Winner
For MIranda and her Dad
His hand-knit booties are white with blue trim. I hear giggles stored in their fine-knit toes. How much did they tickle when slipped onto him to keep his feet warm from harsh winter snows? Snug corduroy cap with embroidered lamb would have been worn when the baby was strolled. I think of him sleeping inside his pram and feel every gust of that season's cold. In the softness of sweater's knit and purl, I see his toothless and innocent smile. Such baby-fine wool makes my senses swirl as sight and touch blend, blur and beguile. I smell his sweet breath in the silken blues of his clothes so carefully packed away. I feel so much love in their muted hues, his life before ours on tender display. This small box of treasures, recently found, will pass to our daughter, a precious keepsake, so she can preserve each sight, smell and sound that swirl in the dance these memories make. |
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My ex-husband died four years ago at Christmas time. My daughter and I were offered a few opportunities to go into his mother's house to retrieve his things, but much remained after his mother's death two years ago and then after his sister's very recent passing. Last week I had one last chance to take what I could find that belonged to him before the family's belongings were taken away to be auctioned by his sister's estate.
My daughter, who now lives in California, gave me a list of things to look for, and I had my own list of things to search. One of the most precious finds that neither of us even knew existed turned out to be a small box labeled Roger, that contained several items of his baby clothing. Miranda will get to see these treasures when she comes to visit at Christmas. In the meantime, they are mine to guard.
Divorcing a man does not always mean one no longer loves him. Holding these baby clothes worn by this man during the first winter of his life could not be more meaningful to me.
I thank my young friend, Oli, one of the most talented
writers in our community, for sponsoring this lovely contest and motivating me to write this poem.
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and 2 member cents. My daughter, who now lives in California, gave me a list of things to look for, and I had my own list of things to search. One of the most precious finds that neither of us even knew existed turned out to be a small box labeled Roger, that contained several items of his baby clothing. Miranda will get to see these treasures when she comes to visit at Christmas. In the meantime, they are mine to guard.
Divorcing a man does not always mean one no longer loves him. Holding these baby clothes worn by this man during the first winter of his life could not be more meaningful to me.
I thank my young friend, Oli, one of the most talented
writers in our community, for sponsoring this lovely contest and motivating me to write this poem.
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