General Poetry posted October 19, 2008 Chapters:  ...5 6 -7- 8... 


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You are never prepared for her!

A chapter in the book Going In Through The Out-The Doors

Untamed Spirit!!!!

by Mike K2

"Oh, My God!" There
she goes again.
She must get her energy
from the Devil's den!

"Great Copperheads and
dogs from Hades!"
With her there isn't a moment
of peace made for me!

She'll be fine, with her
doll having some play tea.
I'll find her two hours later
sitting in the field setting
cotton fluffs free.

Damn if she didn't have to show me
what was on the end or her little rake.
So proud, she was, taking the life out
of me... "A coiled up black snake!"

She looked so beautiful, finely
dressed for church with ribbons
in her pristinely combed hair.
"My dear? Where are your ribbons?"
Now covered in mud, she decided who
needed them more was the hog over there!

My husband is proud of the life
he provided me, as he always
finds his way into the field.
I'll consider him a true man when
he gives me a break and finds the time
with his daughter to deal!

I know she will one day be a lady
and take a nice gentleman's hand.
I bet it will be just a short while,
until he finds just what a spirited
woman he did land!




This poem is designed to read exactly as it is. A short simple exclamation, going into these run on excited stanzas, much like a woman who has just dealt with such a child! My intention with the rhyme is not exactly to find perfect matches in every case, but one that continued the flow without giving up their meaning.

Photograph copyright 1993 by Michael W. Kohlman Baltimore, MD

This photograph came from my print file of an unreleased and incomplete article, "Reliving History... A hobby, A Pursuit, A Lifetime." This was taken at Fort Frederick State Park in Maryland who once a year, hosts reenactments for the French and Indian War, The Revolutionary War and the Civil War. Various reenactment groups get together and set up camps. Being more then just a bunch of guys pretending to shoot at each other. Many bring family and set up camp, demonstrating also the life and traditions of their era. They also have live cannon firing demonstrations.

For the photograph, "This is not a photograph of a reenactment, but an actual battle;- the oldest one. Young Shannon tests the readiness and capabilities of her mother Jeanine Joyce. Her husband serves with the 13th Virginia Company." I was photographing a cannon when I heard this squeal followed by, "Oh! My God!" if you think chasing after your daughter is bad, imagine doing it in petticoats and bodices. I had to be a gunslinger to capture this one.
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