General Poetry posted September 22, 2008


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an alligator's lunchbreak from a to z

Alligator: Appetite Attack!

by adewpearl


For nature lovers and word lovers alike
Appetite attack.
Bayou basker,
banquets beckon.

Captured-critter canapes -
Cajun delight.

Emergent edgy eyes
fall, fatefully gazing -
hunger-heavy impassive jaw.

Kickback -
Kidnap -
Kill!!

Laggards?
Lunch.

Massive-mouthed monster,
navigate observantly,
paddle quietly,
range surreptitiously -
tackle thrashing takedown under.

Villainous violence -
Watery walloper.

X-cise
Yawn
Zap!



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Since many of my FS friends seemed to enjoy the grasshopper from a to z, I thought I'd have more fun and share this little snapshot of a hungry alligator catching his lunch :-)
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