General Poetry posted August 1, 2008


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Only a few words with a dictionionay of meaning.

Unexpected

by Mike K2

With love,
Love,
My love

All
Accepted!

All of my love!

Unexpected

"All of my love,"
flows out of me
just like that same
Led Zeppelin song,
with its tremoloed
singing and violin
like weeping.


Just a small amount
of love from you
is worth my valued
heartfelt keeping.

Only you sketched
me whole.
Made worth it,
what highwaymen
stole.

It's sad to see you
sit all alone,
when our spirits
already shared and
together, truly shone.

My image hangs
on your wall.
Yours, spot lighted
in my heart's hall.

It matters not,
to be fated,
as friends that
are distant.
Nor, slated as
lovers to be
destined.

That tear I drew,
is my pendant
so the, "sun always
shines", as I remember
and I "Thank You!"




A person that I revered here said them and it just brought this poem to mind. I listened to the groups BBC series and it was funny, I found a line from each and every song that applied. These are more rough and characteristic of the blues that inspired the group. Thany you has an effect on me as it reminded me of a little blond haired girl walking down the hall with her Led Zeppelin shit and pointy elbows and also one other. "That's the Way,' also out in my mind.
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