General Poetry posted July 1, 2008


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Just a poetic thought that came to me.

Gossamer Thoughts

by Mike K2

Sometimes my thoughts
come out too strong.
Others miss their marks
as I waited too long.

A few slip out inappropriately
and become embarrassing.
Another two were really
meant for only one to see.

Here and there are those that
add up to a necklace of bricks.
Some are the flirty ones like
an ice cube down the back or
a between the ribs prick.

~~~~~

I hope the finer ones are
somehow felt or seen.
Carried through the winds
of time; of what is, what
will be and what has been seen.

I hope my gentle thoughts can
be heard in a cricket's song.
Or seen as a puzzling grasshopper
along your path hopping along.

Like that butterfly that captures
an enchanted child's attention.
Seen as a vehicle for your spirits
growing and sustaining pension.

How about my best wishes that are
like those coded flittings of fireflies.
Perhaps like a cleansing shower
from the spring time skies.

A blanket that floats down
and comforts your fear.
Possibly like a bauble that becomes
an heirloom, that you can hold dear.

A Japanese lantern built lightly enough
that a candle flame causes it to float.
Wisping though the air like incense
held in a little oriental boat. 

I hope all of these thoughts weave
together into a beautifully painted  scene
and are your warmth and comfort, so
you never have any bad dreams.

Those type of thoughts from you,
in my life played their part.
I hope that my thoughts are captured
and held in the cage of your heart.




From the Meriam-Webster Online Dictionary

Gossamer-2 entries found.

gossamer[1,noun]gossamer[2,adjective]

Main Entry: 1gos??sa??mer
Pronunciation: ??g??-s??-m??r also ??g??z-m??r, ??g??-z??-
Function: noun
Etymology: Middle English gossomer, from gos goose + somer summer
Date: 14th century
1 : a film of cobwebs floating in air in calm clear weather
2 : something light, delicate, or insubstantial
In writing this, the first definition stayed in my mind. (Unlike the cobweb that I walked into and decked, almost knocked out a friend twice my size.) In this poem, I speak to the lingering in my mind of a more then chance meeting of someone that you know you were meant to. Sometimes the reason doesn't quite come into view, other times it is there from the start, hoping conditions are right for lasting. Poetry has been just as much exploration for me as climbing a mountain or crawling thought the unexplored bowels of the earth. I delight in this emotional adventure, yet there exist these penetrating sublime thoughts that for me remain in my mind. Being forever grateful, I hope that these more delicate and floating thoughts somehow reach that person, always demonstrating my appreciation...
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