General Poetry posted February 2, 2008


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Reality Paradox

by Mike K2

I am told to
leave my virtual
world, so I should
find real people.

You need to get out,
find someone, but not ours.
To experience life, dance
communicate and care for
each other.

But they look away,
refusing to see.
They don't speak,
should I leave them be?
They don't hear, how
do I communicate with you?
They don't care, taking
advantage of your situations
and kicking you til' black and blue.

___________________________________


We greet each other, listen as
if a spiritual brother.
Having affection, warmth and love;
support, and the kindness as
expected from above.

No airs, only cares and heartfelt
love. A respite for the life
forced upon us, we convince
each other to go on, because
this world still is just.

A portal into the vast world
that put like minds together,
adding that spiritual quality
that makes this day better.

I choose the latter world,
where goodness and dreams
thrive.

Not the world, that tells
me not to waste my time
and only bad acts thrive.








We all have pursuits and hobbies to improve the quality of life. This is about the myopia of the mind that makes people feel the need to have other people think and act as themselves, instead of enjoying each others individualities. It is also a response to a put down.

This is also in response to a much larger line of thought, that I am exposed to. FS has been great for me, I work such that I only have a couple of hours a day to devote to anything. I enjoy putting my works out there and have them commented on. This is only the first step for me. Friends, neighbors and coworkers have grown tired of seeing my work and wish that I would stop writing. Here if someone get irritated, tired or bored; there is always someone to take their place. I also find people's understanding, knowledge and experience's to be broader then the average persons at home. There is a little flirting and fun, but it not like the other sites where we are pretending to be someone else just for purulent reasons.
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