Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted August 24, 2006


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5-7-5. Short-lived dark pleasure or long-lived white joy?

O Evils!

by Alcreator Litt Dear


If they ever taste white joy, the long-lasting state of serene bliss pleasure!

Happy with short-lived
Dark, illusive, black pleasure?
If tasted white joy!



 



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If tasted white joy! By this I wish to mean if you tasted white joy/pure joy/true joy/moral joy/infinite joy/everlasting joy/ long-lived happiness with joy/long-realized happiness with joy ever



The word black used here to mean and refer to expressions or meanings to words like: amoral, depressing, devastating, dreadful, fatal, grimy, harmful, immoral, impious, ironic, irreligious, morbid, nefarious, pessimistic, skanky, sour, stained, unfortunate, unrighteous, vicious, villainous and / or weird


I have used the word dark to mean and refer to the meaning and expressions to similar words: abstruse, atrocious, cryptic, damnable, dusky, forbidding, foul, grey, hellish, infamous, infernal, mysterious, mystic, nefarious, occult, ominous, puzzling, satanic, secret, shadowy, sinful, vile and /or wicked


I have used the word white to mean and refer to opposite to the words: black, illusive, and / or dark


This is a Commentary and Philosophy poem in 5-7-5 syllables


Theme: Live wisely/meaningfully; taste/get/feel long-lived happiness with joy


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