General Poetry posted October 20, 2021


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Love Poem - Modified Villanelle

Winters Into Springs

by kiwisteveh


I love you for so many little things -
that certain look that makes me grow weak-kneed
and how you turn my winters into springs.

The way you look in lacy underthings,
the sweetness of your thought, your word, your deed -
that's why I love you for so many things.

Outrageous fortune's arrows and its slings
are cast aside like so much tumbleweed.
That's how you turn my winters into springs.

Your loyalty comes freely, with no strings
and that is why I claim it's guaranteed
I love you for so many special things.

Each day you treat me like the king of kings;
when I am with you all my fears recede.
Once more you turn my winters into springs.

The soothing touch you bring to life's sharp stings,
the way your heart leaps out to those who bleed -
I love you for a thousand other things,
but most for turning winters into springs.

 



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Villanelle
A villanelle is a poetic form with nineteen lines and a strict pattern of repetition and a rhyme scheme. Each villanelle is comprised of five tercets (i.e., a three-line stanza) followed by one quatrain (a stanza with four lines). The first and third lines of the opening tercet are repeated in an alternating pattern as the final line of each next tercet; those two repeated lines then form the final two lines of the entire poem. The rhyme scheme calls for those repeating lines to rhyme, and for the second line of every tercet to rhyme. Thus, the rhyme scheme looks like this: A1 b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 A2.

The most famous villanelle in English is Dylan Thomas's "Do not go gentle into that good night"

I have modified this villanelle by making small changes in both of the repeating lines.
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