Very creative writing and a good storyline in such few words. Good job of not using the "S" in an extremely touching story.
Sorry to the cornflake - you nearly got my vote, but this little foot just kicked you a bit too hard!
The scenario and the humour is great.
I really enjoyed the playful recognition of not being able to use the letter s.
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