I love the flow of this poem and you've done an excellent job of using all the words to tell a story.
This poem is a delightful revival of the simple love shared by teenagers that sometimes lasts a lifetime. Those brief years, lived fully and passed forever, are kept alive in this verse.
This poem brings back memories.
It was a hard choice, but this one stood out for me above the rest, not only because it was so well and beautifully written but because of it's originality and important message.
Love this!
Awesome!
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