Hilarious rant!
Take note, poets! Give us something else to read about. Be original.
She took the risk to rate a real controversy.
Your poem would have been worth voting for if it were not for your open hostility towards Mexicans .. I found your ending verse
...... those Mexicans are animals.
so let's treat them as such .....
utterly deploring.
You need to practise what you preach in your poem " Just Like Buddha" where you praise Buddhism teachings and quote:
" Prayer is very important to practise;
Forgiveness, compassion, tolerance and love.
Tempeste
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