A brilliant story and a must read
Another fantastic write, all I'm wondering now is where was chapter one - did I miss it - cause I need to read chapter 1...
Ulla has done the best job of setting the stage, and relating the experience of frustrated travel that we all share. Then she reveals family drama that we understand could only make that travel experience more stressful, and vice versa. It also seems apparent this is a story that has been written and re-written, and probably edited down. The craftsmanship (craftswomanship?) is excellent I feel she did hands down the best job in this contest.
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