AWESOME entry with A FABULOUS story that touches hearts in a way most appreciate. I believe Paul is proud of YOU for sharing this SUPER presentation!
It was a tossup between the two and I really know what to do. So, I tossed up this coin and it fell 'tween my loins, but when I flipped it for heads, I changed my mind instead and finally the coin came up tails.
So powerful and emotional. Really got to me. Heartbreaking. Outstanding writing!
Quite an awesome presentation based on reality. It is the best rhyming poem in the War and History Category I have read on FanStory.
The rhyme was good I felt. It was a war to end wars and I can relate - and I do wonder what it would have been like if all those good men had come home. Most of my uncles served and my dad was packed, ready to go, when they lowered the age rate. Good job reminding us of what we should not forget.