Great flow of words, thought and poetic rhyme.
I like the vividness and immediacy shown in the details.
This is an excellent poem, one with such a positive message, I couldn't resist voting for it! Kudos, author!
made me smile reading this!
Full of wisdom, soul, and realization. Simple, easy rhyming pattern with a beautiful message.
Shazam! "Awesome Presentation!"
A lot said in only six lines. The message is crystal clear to me. Thank, God, I wasn't the man in reference--"Ouch!" The effects will last for the whole of his life.