Why? Because you're a writer. That's why. This poem strikes a chord for many. You had the courage to address it. You asked questions and I believe you deserve answers. You approached the topic creatively and didn't whine in a negative way. Many interesting choices of words, not the least of which was whine/wine. Good job - You made a good point about feedback.
River of Dan
is a science fiction novel that defines homo sapiens deep seated explorer spirit when confronted by a dying sun four and a half billion years from now, recreating the pioneering spirit brought about by the challenging environment they find themselves in and the will to survive. It follows these future earthlings as they finally break the bonds of science that had kept them in their own solar system, allowing travel to distant worlds light years away, seeking for a new home