The best one. Well written and free verse but the story is kept within a structured story . some other waffle and make no sense
It's a beautiful story with vivid imagery, a silky flow, and emotion that touches the heart and soul.
A wonderfully worded original poem.
The poem is superfluous. The picture's enough for me!
This one tells it like it is directly and believably so! Love this writer's work.
This had a nice intimacy and immediacy to it. You were able to draw me into the alley and ignite my senses and feelings. You shouldn't make free verse an infrequent endeavor. :))