Always enjoy Jay's work.
Your essay on Munro's choice for the point of view was the most important factor. Much like Scout in "To Kill a Mockingbird", the narrator is the difference between Pulitzer and obscurity.
Nobody writes 'mokes' like this guy.
I found this story to be riviting
This one gave me goosebumps when I read it. Amazing writing.
Very interesting and suspenseful. l.
Well done Phyllis. You keep going my friend! xx
Excellent character development