Contest Vote For Create a HaibunThe voting has ended. Showing the final vote count. |
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8 votes | Human Error (haibun) by Spiritual Echo |
7 votes | Late September by Sugarray77 |
5 votes | Dolphin Kiss by June Sargent |
5 votes | Stars in my eyes by zanya |
3 votes | Soulful Morning by HarryT |
3 votes | Sad Song by janbar |
It was hard to choose one of so many good ones.
This was terrific, but I wondered how "haibun" it was UNTIL your closing haiku. THAT gave it the feel I was looking for. A powerful write among many.
So many outstanding entries. This one has a very strong AHA and excellent crafting on multiple levels.
unequaled
...has a moving story of lost love in the world that keeps revolving.
Stars in my eyes is so beautiful and poetical. l.
Invigorates