My fear also.
Your writing has a haunting theme. Your words are descriptive and makes the thoughts and fears more intense.
Each line brings you into closer contact with this painful reality---dying alone.
I found this story captivating and real.
I found no technical errors. Thank you for sharing it wit us.
Who wouldn't be afraid of fires knowing all that he said can happen.
From dust we are created
And to dust we shall return... a poem about dying, but what I fear is the dust ball under the bed.
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