General Poetry posted November 22, 2018


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A Tanka poem

Tanka(seagull reaches sea)

by Pamusart

seagull reaches sea
descends and dives from dark sky
red bird strains its neck
sees that there's no danger here
but for fish whose time has come

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I hid a fish, a bone and a genie in the clouds. Can you see them? Just clouds shaped like those items.

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Painting by me Seagull Over Water. Oil on canvas
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