Beara Bella

I think I faintly remember doing a poetry assignment in grade school and hated doing the poetry and now I'm a poet. Well I did hate reading and writing when I was younger and now I write more, but still don't read often even though I do enjoy it.

Dean Kuch:

June 9, 2016 at 2:43AM

Kingsland: If you're on this site a lot, you're reading. Reading is reading, no matter what it is. It doesn't have to pertain to a book. If you are reading on this site, then you're reading...

June 9, 2016 at 6:11AM

I have two poems here. One I wrote back in 2013. Oh my goodness what an amateur I was with it. Then below that one I rewrote the poem from the poet I am today and there's a big difference. I want to be a better poet than I am now. Someone get me into a poetry class.

I remember long ago 
we would sing, oh
sing a love song.
It was truly sweet,
refreshing to my heart.
I remember the words
and how we sang 
each word with joy.
I remember the day
that the world turned
black and our love
was forever ruined.
I remember how I
cried and cried over
losing you, my love.
I remember, yes
I do remember

I remember our song
Containing expressions.
A severless love we had
In those blissy days.
But as the years flipped
Into a history book
A coalish black I saw
Birthed in your eyes.
The world abducted you
Into its enchantment.
I tried to save you with
A fairytale kiss, but I
Couldn't resuscitate you.
I yowled on a wet pillow
Knowing that you
Are in its possession.
I sit in a wilted garden
Next to your property
Constantly wondering if
You remember our song.

Sometimes I like writing the end of poems that have no closure in them as what happens next to make people think or to show things can go either way. Does anyone else do that?

DIS-illusioned: I dare say you are quite unique in this most fascinating endeavor. Amend on, writer--amend on! (Or is that addendum on?)

March 6, 2016 at 2:55PM

Beara Bella: Thank you. Poetry is a real art and I want to be creative in it.

March 8, 2016 at 3:43PM

I haven't been on so much cause I've been a tad under the weather and had work and school along with a lack of sleep.

evilynne: Get rest and feel better! Evi

February 14, 2016 at 9:44AM

Beara Bella: I'm really just tired right now from a concert I went to last night. I rocked out so hard. It was fun. Definitely don't regret going.

February 14, 2016 at 11:51AM

Should us poets just write crazy stuff every now and then just for fun and see what different wording we can come up with? Maybe as a writing exercise?

Kingsland: Yes, you should do exactly that. That is part of what writing is all about...

February 5, 2016 at 10:41AM

DIS-illusioned: Try that here, especially in the contests, and you'd be begging for a literary lynching--or crucifixion. LOL!

February 5, 2016 at 2:07PM

I just put a crazy insane, not the best poem ever out here for y'all. I promise I'll have something way better out on here again soon.

I think as writers we should search for uniqueness in the wording for our poems, stories, etc to make us better and unpredictable to the readers.

I seriously wish I knew about this website sooner. I just found it this week and I honestly wasn't looking for it when I went to do a google search, but I ended up here.

mrsmajor: Welcome, glad you found us, and joined the family!

January 30, 2016 at 10:41PM

Beara Bella: Thank you

January 30, 2016 at 11:53PM

~Dovey: Welcome, Beara Bella. If you have any questions on posting or reviewing, feel free to ask. We'll help you find the proper direction. I can't wait to see some of your poetry. :)

January 31, 2016 at 10:15AM

Bbypets: Welcome Beara. I'm a newbie myself this week.

January 31, 2016 at 1:07PM

Ideasaregems-Dawn: Welcome! Wishing you much success. :)

February 2, 2016 at 2:02AM

Beara Bella: Thank you

February 2, 2016 at 2:52AM

Why do we write what we do? The good, the bad, the serious, the humorous, etc. What is it on the inside that stirs us to write. I know the talent of writing comes from God, but what triggers that gift and the subjects we write?

I want to be the best poet I can be. God has given me gift and I want to learn as much as I can to be a better writer when the poetry flows out of from my inner insides.

michaelcahill: Throw 'em out here. We'll read them and give you all the best help we can. MOST of us are pretty kind too. The ones that aren't, we'll protect you from them. :))

January 28, 2016 at 3:39AM

Linda Engel: ditto to what Mike said.

January 28, 2016 at 9:15AM

I am Cat: double ditto what Mikey and Linda said ;) And welcome, we have cookies! ;)

January 28, 2016 at 9:16AM

mrsmajor: Well, you're on the right site...There's so many here that will be waiting to read your poems...just continue to learn on God, and the words will flow...

January 28, 2016 at 2:37PM

F. Wehr3: Wait a minute, no one told me about cookies.

January 28, 2016 at 5:44PM

Beara Bella: Thank you all so much. I'll pass on the cookies. I'm working on loosing weight and definitely don't need them at the moment.

January 28, 2016 at 10:12PM

Barb Hensongispsaca: I too add my help if you want it. This is a great place to practice , learn , and grow. I am still growing with the help of a lot of friends.

January 30, 2016 at 3:22PM