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Barry70:

Hi everyone.
I recently submitted a story, the first of what I hope to be a book.
With past submissions I got more response. I was hoping that would be the case with this as well. Is there anything I can do to encourage that? More certificates? perhaps?
Any advice will be greatly appreciated.
Thanks....

September 19, 2014 at 6:37PM
    michaelcahill: I'm on my cell phone at the moment so _ could only take a glance. I can tell you that the length is going to scare many potential reveiwers away. Remeber that they can review a poem for the the same reward. I would break this up into smaller bites. That will get you a more detailed review as well. For a first chapter it's your best shot at getting a following. How about a thousand words and try to get it on the front page. That's your best bet with a first look.
    September 19, 2014 at 6:53PM
    William Walz: Praying is always a viable option.
    September 19, 2014 at 7:26PM
    michaelcahill: Too much forgiveness involved in praying. We want critique!!
    September 19, 2014 at 8:11PM
    Barry70: Thank you guys.
    I'll look into it...
    Even the praying.
    God Bless.
    September 22, 2014 at 6:26PM

Barry70:

Would anyone like to read my new short story and tell me what they think of it?

July 30, 2014 at 11:07PM
    vapros: I saw it, and reviewed it at some length. It was not ready, but I reviewed it anyway. Be well.
    July 31, 2014 at 12:29AM
    Barry70: Thanks to all who shared with me their time and thoughts...
    This is why I joined.
    Take care.
    July 31, 2014 at 3:35AM
    pafaust: I read it. I liked it. I think you have potential to be my favorite kind of writer because I can feel that you are passionate about what you write about.
    July 31, 2014 at 6:02PM