Barry70: Hi everyone.
I recently submitted a story, the first of what I hope to be a book.
With past submissions I got more response. I was hoping that would be the case with this as well. Is there anything I can do to encourage that? More certificates? perhaps?
Any advice will be greatly appreciated.
Thanks....
    michaelcahill: I'm on my cell phone at the moment so _ could only take a glance. I can tell you that the length is going to scare many potential reveiwers away. Remeber that they can review a poem for the the same reward. I would break this up into smaller bites. That will get you a more detailed review as well. For a first chapter it's your best shot at getting a following. How about a thousand words and try to get it on the front page. That's your best bet with a first look. -
    michaelcahill: Too much forgiveness involved in praying. We want critique!! -
    Barry70: Thank you guys.
    I'll look into it...
    Even the praying.
    God Bless. -


Barry70: Would anyone like to read my new short story and tell me what they think of it?
    vapros: I saw it, and reviewed it at some length. It was not ready, but I reviewed it anyway. Be well. -
    Barry70: Thanks to all who shared with me their time and thoughts...
    This is why I joined.
    Take care.
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    pafaust: I read it. I liked it. I think you have potential to be my favorite kind of writer because I can feel that you are passionate about what you write about. -