Peter Fryer: I personally think one of the saddest things concerning human nature can be explained with a simple answer. We do not spend enough time with the people we love the most. Like our parents, brothers and sisters, and our children because our minds have a way of playing a cruel trick on us. Because of our love we believe there will always be a tomorrow. Then reality steps in and hits us with a baseball bat square in the kisser. Knowing I made that mistake leaves me with only one option, and that is hope there is a god. That way my parents will get this message. I miss you.
    Imogen JH: Quite right Peter. It annots the hell out of me to hear people complain about their children when I might not see mine grow up.

    They don't know what their saying. -
    Peter Fryer: Hope things improve for you and I know it has a lot to do with how positive you keep yourself when fighting that battle. good luck -


Peter Fryer: Thank you for your impute this is my first attempt and I could not afford a editor or proofreader and who do you trust anyway. I noticed lots of scams out there. So I winged it and I am looking to go further with this if you could recommend a publishing outlet It would be gratefully appreciated.
    c_lucas: Fanstory is a teaching site. Welcome -
    Peter Fryer: I believe a story should be edited if the author wants to follow that path. I decided that even though my reviews might suffer my story is told by me without the influence of proof readers and editors. -


Peter Fryer: This has been a long and learning experience for me I hope you like the story.