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Scene at a Diner 2

Pons and Ned at a diner

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL! How do you work these out, Bill? They are hilarious. The change in the names is so well worked out, that even I get muddled with what poor Pons is trying to say. Another great part to this hilarious script. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Sandra. They just work off each other well.
Comment from robyn corum
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Bill,

ummmm... scary.

I never can figure out how you CONTINUE to pull this off. It would seem like you'd be running out of puns and silly comments by now. But I'm glad you haven't.

Are you entering that 'pun' contest? 'Cause you should.

Thanks!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
    When I lean that way I CANT. Then I lie awake and in my sleep.
Comment from Earl Corp
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Good to see Ned and Pons back at it. I'm not so fond of Know-it-all Hed though. Can't wait to see how this ends. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2020
    Thanks, Earl
Comment from BethShelby
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The play continues with the crazy group of characters constantly misunderstanding each other. Pons, the bright Dude, seem not to be too bright when it come to selecting those he hangs our with. LOL

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
    They're all related.
Comment from judiverse
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I love Ned and Fed's confusion about the movie title. Geogaphy is another word that causes them confusion. I don't know about the cow tongue on the menu. Cow dung surely couldn't be much worse. There must be another bit of confusion when Fed says he smells Oscar. He surely can't mean this movie might win an Oscar. Anyway, the server adds to the confusion by saying Oscar got off at noon and he's the one who smells. Funny script. Everyone seems to be talking at cross purposes. judi

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    These guys are surely confused on their best day.
reply by judiverse on 18-Oct-2020
    If there's at a place that offers cow's tongue, they're definitely off the track. judi
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
    I remember my mom cooking it once, but I don't recall eating it. It looked like she dropped a person's foot in the pressure cooker.
reply by judiverse on 19-Oct-2020
    I think my parents may have had cow's tongue, but if they did I'm sure I wouldn't have eaten it. You can't even find calf's liver in the supermarkets any more. judi
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    You have to give the secret handshake. ; )
reply by judiverse on 19-Oct-2020
    It's so secret I don't know it. judi
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Bill, you are just as good at writing nonsense as you are writing on serious subjects. I find this post to be mostly nonsense, but there must be a purpose in it somewhere. The writing is excellent as always.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Pons and Ned are an ongoing series that has episodes pop up now and then.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Bill, I love everything about it. The humour is fabulous and the setting and dialogue is spot on. In short, it's well written and worth reading. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Ulla, for the terrific review. Bill
Comment from RGstar
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Love the comedy, love the humour, love the choice of words used. I am not sure if this is one of many as I have been away much, but very well delivered.
My very best Bill.
Have a great day.
RG

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Thanks, RG
Comment from Mistydawn
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Who would eat cow tongue? That's as bad as pickled pigs feet in my book. Your script is well-written, very interesting realistic. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Thanks, MD
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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You know I am slowly unable to look at donuts anymore without thinking about these four. I will pass though on cow tongue.
I enjoyed this next chapter and getting to see these guys actually sitting in a booth.
Very good Bill.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Thanks, Mary