Opening my Ballot
opportunity knocks79 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Jesse,
Well done both in your wording, delivery and framing a most important duty as a citizen.
My hats off to you for writing about this subject.
excellent job
Mary
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Jesse,
Well done both in your wording, delivery and framing a most important duty as a citizen.
My hats off to you for writing about this subject.
excellent job
Mary
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You obviously take your voting very seriously and I am never indecisive when I vote I know way before the elections who I shall vote for but so many deliberate right up until the final moment, these are the voters that many candidates fight to win over, I enjoyed your journey here Jesse, love Dolly x
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You obviously take your voting very seriously and I am never indecisive when I vote I know way before the elections who I shall vote for but so many deliberate right up until the final moment, these are the voters that many candidates fight to win over, I enjoyed your journey here Jesse, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
Comment from AnnieDawn
Well put, well put, well put. I cannot say it enough. You have stated what needs to be told to every citizen of this country. Thank you for this post and I wish all could read and accept the warning.
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Well put, well put, well put. I cannot say it enough. You have stated what needs to be told to every citizen of this country. Thank you for this post and I wish all could read and accept the warning.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
Comment from Ben Colder
It is said a good understanding is better than misunderstanding. I think your write hits the nail on the head.
I always check to see if my vote would endanger or help our Republic we now have.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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It is said a good understanding is better than misunderstanding. I think your write hits the nail on the head.
I always check to see if my vote would endanger or help our Republic we now have.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I love reading poems about voting. No-one seems to realize the number of people who slip through the holes in the system and aren't allowed to vote. I would love to have the opportunity to make a change, but it is denied me. I am only good for paying taxes.
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I love reading poems about voting. No-one seems to realize the number of people who slip through the holes in the system and aren't allowed to vote. I would love to have the opportunity to make a change, but it is denied me. I am only good for paying taxes.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned about casting your vote. You used great descriptive words. We will be voting soon too. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about casting your vote. You used great descriptive words. We will be voting soon too. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh, boy that's hard, you need to close toy eyes make the sign of the cross and castš??? rien n'est va plus, les jeux sont fais! Please excuse my rusty French.
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Oh, boy that's hard, you need to close toy eyes make the sign of the cross and castš??? rien n'est va plus, les jeux sont fais! Please excuse my rusty French.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
Comment from palmart
Looks like a controversial subject! But you made a poem of an uncommon situation as it is not referred to love, or profession or social decision, but the one you refer to, affects in different ways most of them. Unfortunately you decided not to place a general picture, but imagination may fill the gap.
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Looks like a controversial subject! But you made a poem of an uncommon situation as it is not referred to love, or profession or social decision, but the one you refer to, affects in different ways most of them. Unfortunately you decided not to place a general picture, but imagination may fill the gap.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
Comment from mermaids
Your free verse form adds to the strength of your theme
Your words encourage readers to take voting seriously and really think about it. Excellent poem that is relevant to today
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Your free verse form adds to the strength of your theme
Your words encourage readers to take voting seriously and really think about it. Excellent poem that is relevant to today
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you, Jesse, for this great attitude you have about our privilege to vote. We can complain about the politicians but we are graced with the ability to have a say.
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Thank you, Jesse, for this great attitude you have about our privilege to vote. We can complain about the politicians but we are graced with the ability to have a say.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2020
