History's Judgment
A short rhyme21 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written poem with great rhyme and flow. History can be unkind to quiet men like me. But I hope beyond all hope it will grant me a reprieve. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Beautifully written poem with great rhyme and flow. History can be unkind to quiet men like me. But I hope beyond all hope it will grant me a reprieve. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Boogienights
Sometimes it the quiet people who get the most done in the world. With all the chaos in this country, we should all take a stand to change things. Very well written, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Sometimes it the quiet people who get the most done in the world. With all the chaos in this country, we should all take a stand to change things. Very well written, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, thought provoking and creative.
I pondered on the words and theme of this poem. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is engaging and compliments these
words. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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The author's words are interesting, thought provoking and creative.
I pondered on the words and theme of this poem. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is engaging and compliments these
words. Have a great day!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about history that can be unkind and reminds us of the bad things that happen but the good things aren that we learn to avoid making the same mistakes.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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A very well-written poem about history that can be unkind and reminds us of the bad things that happen but the good things aren that we learn to avoid making the same mistakes.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your time and kind review.
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this well-written piece. History won't judge me harshly; it won't judge me at all I expect; I'm hoping to be forgotten within 100 years after my death. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Congratulations on this well-written piece. History won't judge me harshly; it won't judge me at all I expect; I'm hoping to be forgotten within 100 years after my death. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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A six! Thank you!!!
Comment from Rosemary wanjiru
Great poem, I enjoyed reading it. The rhyming is musical. A beautifully written piece. The grammar is perfect ð???. Nice imagery, it's eye-catching. The best of wishes
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Great poem, I enjoyed reading it. The rhyming is musical. A beautifully written piece. The grammar is perfect ð???. Nice imagery, it's eye-catching. The best of wishes
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your time and kind review.
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
What a beautiful poem .You did a wonderful job and I enjoyed reading it . My Dad taught me to always stand for my beliefs regardless of others opinions. .To always trust in God and he will see me to everlasting Eternity !
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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What a beautiful poem .You did a wonderful job and I enjoyed reading it . My Dad taught me to always stand for my beliefs regardless of others opinions. .To always trust in God and he will see me to everlasting Eternity !
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your time and kind review
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was an enjoyable poem. I love how you have written. It flows wonderfully and the rhyme is so natural. I also thought it was a thoughtful message that I enjoyed.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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This was an enjoyable poem. I love how you have written. It flows wonderfully and the rhyme is so natural. I also thought it was a thoughtful message that I enjoyed.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your time and kind review
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Poignant and powerful--coincidentally, I just posted a 6-liner on this theme of making a stand, then taking a seat--as termed in your priceless conclusion--willful apathy--brilliant!--you nailed it.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Poignant and powerful--coincidentally, I just posted a 6-liner on this theme of making a stand, then taking a seat--as termed in your priceless conclusion--willful apathy--brilliant!--you nailed it.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your time and kind review
Comment from judester
This is a powerful poem. Wistful, the author seems overwhelmed by circumstance and apathy.
Everything will be okay.
I feel the troubles we have now, are the catalyst for an enlightened and just America.
Have a great weekend, cheers.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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This is a powerful poem. Wistful, the author seems overwhelmed by circumstance and apathy.
Everything will be okay.
I feel the troubles we have now, are the catalyst for an enlightened and just America.
Have a great weekend, cheers.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2020
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I pray you are right. Thanks so much for six!
