The Power of One
Hope always8 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a great entry for the 75 Word Story writing prompt. I was glued to it from the beginning to the end. I hope this story does well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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This is a great entry for the 75 Word Story writing prompt. I was glued to it from the beginning to the end. I hope this story does well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Thank you
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I voted for this entry!
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thank you!
Comment from palmart
Great Poem!! I found in your words a sincere exposition (or you have the gift of putting exactly in your character`s shoes), but apart from this point, You invite to hope which is key to find a way out of any disadvantage situation, like the one you described superbly. And fully agree that love is what makes the World go around!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Great Poem!! I found in your words a sincere exposition (or you have the gift of putting exactly in your character`s shoes), but apart from this point, You invite to hope which is key to find a way out of any disadvantage situation, like the one you described superbly. And fully agree that love is what makes the World go around!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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I write about my life here, this was hard to keep at 75 words, I try to just cover the basic premise
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So again: Great Poem! I wanted to be respectful as your writing reflected intimacy and I did not want to be superficial in my review. I agree that it is hard to keep the limit and express so many things. But you did!
Hope you the Best in the contest!
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thank you, you are adorable!
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You too! Thank you for sharing your "internal Universe". Have a dream and follow it!
Thanks for yor words!
Have a great...Life!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery writer, thank you for sharing your story. I don't know if I could tell a story in 75 words, I may have to give it a try. I think you executed the writing prompt well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Hello mystery writer, thank you for sharing your story. I don't know if I could tell a story in 75 words, I may have to give it a try. I think you executed the writing prompt well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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it was difficult to be concise,; thank you for your review
Comment from AnnieDawn
I always like to read a story that is based on faith. I wish there could have been more meat to this story but understand the reason for it being so short. The contest should consider this one well on its way as it has a good base Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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I always like to read a story that is based on faith. I wish there could have been more meat to this story but understand the reason for it being so short. The contest should consider this one well on its way as it has a good base Well done.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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thanks for your nice review
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written seventy-five word flash fiction about the one thing that we can hold on to in any crisis or trouble on our way that will carry us through to the end.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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A very well-written seventy-five word flash fiction about the one thing that we can hold on to in any crisis or trouble on our way that will carry us through to the end.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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thank you, its true. the one thing you have to the End. thank.you much
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Certainly a wonderful story of redemption and finding one's self... A great offering for the limited contest here - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Certainly a wonderful story of redemption and finding one's self... A great offering for the limited contest here - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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thank you
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 75 word story speaks you hit rock bottom and lost almost everything, but you had hope, faith and love you know the power of the greatest one; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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This 75 word story speaks you hit rock bottom and lost almost everything, but you had hope, faith and love you know the power of the greatest one; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading and for understanding it.
Comment from LisaMay
It's a good result that God has a plan for you - enabling you to push off rock bottom and surface again. Love will see you through. Your story is a good lesson to maintain hope.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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It's a good result that God has a plan for you - enabling you to push off rock bottom and surface again. Love will see you through. Your story is a good lesson to maintain hope.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you L.M. for your nice review
