Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written hundred word story. It doesn't matter how we look on the outside in heaven because only the inside matters there. In hell it will not matter either because there it will all burn to ashes.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020

Hello my dear friend:) and thank you so much for your review and comments:)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This 100 word story speaks about Devil and Hell, mention of God comes in course of conversation but of no use, hell is now hotter with the girl and love; well said; thank you for sharing this; ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020

Hello my dear friend:) and thank you so much for your review and comments:) I like your intake on this story:)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun post and you made me smile, just a few suggestions below to smooth out the grammar, love Dolly x


What do you know about grief, old Devil? Do you know that nobody is really gone until...(they are) gone?

- What is this nonsense?

- Your heart is too cold to comprehend our human lives. Only God knows us.

- What has God (got) to do with this? You are in hell, girl. There is no escape from here.

- Oh, well, let me put (on) my mascara.

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 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020

Hello my dear friend:) and thank you so much for your review and comments:)