The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "My precious one"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
23 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You had me going when you mentioned precious things....what is she referring to? Then you said the words, Lysol wipes. They are precious and very much needed in these times.
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You had me going when you mentioned precious things....what is she referring to? Then you said the words, Lysol wipes. They are precious and very much needed in these times.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from Bramsey Ringleb
I loved this. It was a really great use of only eighty words, and it hits close to home! It was a lot of fun, and I think just about everyone can relate to it. I still do a little happy dance when I find lysol or clorox wipes at the store.
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I loved this. It was a really great use of only eighty words, and it hits close to home! It was a lot of fun, and I think just about everyone can relate to it. I still do a little happy dance when I find lysol or clorox wipes at the store.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written flash fiction about the obsession to have enough lysol wipes and never have a shortage of run out of stock before the pandemic comes to an end.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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A very well-written flash fiction about the obsession to have enough lysol wipes and never have a shortage of run out of stock before the pandemic comes to an end.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Gollum? Is that you, hiding in that cave? I'll trade you 15 Lysol wipes for the Ring! You disappeared? Not fair! You wiped yourself too many times. Or maybe you passed out, from consuming the Lysol that you sprayed in your coffee.
This is very funny, Iza. I was genuinely entertained by it!
Great photo, by the way, my Precioussss.
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Gollum? Is that you, hiding in that cave? I'll trade you 15 Lysol wipes for the Ring! You disappeared? Not fair! You wiped yourself too many times. Or maybe you passed out, from consuming the Lysol that you sprayed in your coffee.
This is very funny, Iza. I was genuinely entertained by it!
Great photo, by the way, my Precioussss.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2020
Comment from teols2016
I'm laughing, even if this is so sadly true. I kind of figured where this was going about halfway through, but you still surprised me at the end. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
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I'm laughing, even if this is so sadly true. I kind of figured where this was going about halfway through, but you still surprised me at the end. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
Comment from Gloria ....
This is terrific, Iza. Even though you have coffee and lysol in the artwork, the Americano led me to believe this was going to be about specialty coffee caps.
Excellent story telling and a fine flash fiction
One typo:
He dosen't (doesn't) have to know that I have them.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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This is terrific, Iza. Even though you have coffee and lysol in the artwork, the Americano led me to believe this was going to be about specialty coffee caps.
Excellent story telling and a fine flash fiction
One typo:
He dosen't (doesn't) have to know that I have them.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
Comment from Bill Schott
This eighty-word flash fiction story, My Precious One, has the required word count and finds that an item's 'precious' rating varies markedly from fantasy to reality.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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This eighty-word flash fiction story, My Precious One, has the required word count and finds that an item's 'precious' rating varies markedly from fantasy to reality.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
Comment from equestrik
This is a great write for our times for sure and speaks to how human values change with the situations at hand. If you are starving, your gold means little compared to a crust of bread. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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This is a great write for our times for sure and speaks to how human values change with the situations at hand. If you are starving, your gold means little compared to a crust of bread. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an interesting entry for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest.
This short story is cute and well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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I think this is an interesting entry for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest.
This short story is cute and well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!!! I had a feeling that was gonna be 'your precious', but this is damn hilarious, Iza -- to think that we've been reduced to this insanity - ugh!! ;) A wonderful offering for the contest, my lady -- best of luck with the committee! ;) Yvette
Yes, Sir, --> Yes, sir,
He dosen't have --> He doesn't have
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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LOL!!! I had a feeling that was gonna be 'your precious', but this is damn hilarious, Iza -- to think that we've been reduced to this insanity - ugh!! ;) A wonderful offering for the contest, my lady -- best of luck with the committee! ;) Yvette
Yes, Sir, --> Yes, sir,
He dosen't have --> He doesn't have
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my silly story:) We know the committee will never accept my silly story, but I have fun writing it:)
