Come On, Get Happy!
Laughter makes life better.17 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a delightful rhythm and fun, jaunty little rhymes... certainly makes the reader want to smile along with you! Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
What a delightful rhythm and fun, jaunty little rhymes... certainly makes the reader want to smile along with you! Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm so glad you liked it.
Comment from Carlos' girl
aaw, your format is just fine. you do have a typo in your author's notes: the way i won't to s/b want to.
very jazzy upbeat poem that offers us a means of joy and happiness. as the saying goes:
he who laughs last laughs longest
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
aaw, your format is just fine. you do have a typo in your author's notes: the way i won't to s/b want to.
very jazzy upbeat poem that offers us a means of joy and happiness. as the saying goes:
he who laughs last laughs longest
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much for the review and comments and for noticing my notes. I wanted it centered under the picture. I 'm glad you like the jazzy upbeat tone.
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you are.welcome
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congratulations on 3rd place
we tied. lol
Comment from jenintorre
I enjoyed reading your lovely uplifting poem. The rhyme is very good and I love the picture. Your advice is very true. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
I enjoyed reading your lovely uplifting poem. The rhyme is very good and I love the picture. Your advice is very true. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. I'm so glad you like this.
:-)
Comment from Raul1
A very positive way to feel happy. I like how you wrote this with so much enthusiasm. Excellent work! I like your piece of poetry. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
A very positive way to feel happy. I like how you wrote this with so much enthusiasm. Excellent work! I like your piece of poetry. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. I'm so glad you like this poem. :-)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
(And happy joy-spreader) haha
This was a really sweet and very well-composed piece that made me smile. The rhythm was different and really enjoyable - almost like a song. I appreciate the good thoughts today! Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
Dear Mystery Writer,
(And happy joy-spreader) haha
This was a really sweet and very well-composed piece that made me smile. The rhythm was different and really enjoyable - almost like a song. I appreciate the good thoughts today! Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review. I'm so glad you liked it.
:-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wise advice here and this is a fine presentation encouraging us all to be happy, I know I am happy because I am never unhappy which is a good indicator! (Unless I am ill) Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
Wise advice here and this is a fine presentation encouraging us all to be happy, I know I am happy because I am never unhappy which is a good indicator! (Unless I am ill) Much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. I'm never unhappy either. We are lucky to have that temperament. Some seem born to be melancholy.
Comment from Boogienights
Just reading this made me happy and put me in a better mood. I think we all need a little laughter in our lives right now, and we should all try this out. It doesn't cost anything! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
Just reading this made me happy and put me in a better mood. I think we all need a little laughter in our lives right now, and we should all try this out. It doesn't cost anything! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm pleased that reading this made you feel happy.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A great poem for the happy poem contest! Put a little giggle in your wiggle and you'll be smilng soon. Good luck with the contest! Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
A great poem for the happy poem contest! Put a little giggle in your wiggle and you'll be smilng soon. Good luck with the contest! Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Patty. I pleased you like this. I like the giggle in your wiggle line. That make me smile.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
It sure is a happy poem. You give your reader a lift with advise to find laughter to be happy. I love your wording that keeps the mood moving forward
I think in these times, it is sound advise.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
It sure is a happy poem. You give your reader a lift with advise to find laughter to be happy. I love your wording that keeps the mood moving forward
I think in these times, it is sound advise.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the review and great comments. Stay happy!
Comment from royowen
Yes, indeed, sometimes the site doesn't necessarily help with formatting. Beautifully written with nice rhyme, a very satisfying theme to the narrative, and beautifully written. I like the very upbeat nature ofvtge poem, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
Yes, indeed, sometimes the site doesn't necessarily help with formatting. Beautifully written with nice rhyme, a very satisfying theme to the narrative, and beautifully written. I like the very upbeat nature ofvtge poem, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you Roy, I am pleased to get such a positive review from a good poet like you.
"-)
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My pleasure