Make Mine a Milk-Shake
Thirsty work getting a cow to move.8 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! :) This is certainly an entertaining fulfillment of these unusual contest requirements - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
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LOL!! :) This is certainly an entertaining fulfillment of these unusual contest requirements - thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wonderful whimsy--jump your juice is priceless--earns your stars in itself. Mooooove--very witty. I checked your syllables and alliteration--set to go! Cheers. LIZ
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Wonderful whimsy--jump your juice is priceless--earns your stars in itself. Mooooove--very witty. I checked your syllables and alliteration--set to go! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Sep-2020
Comment from equestrik
This is a clever little write with a very cute little cow picture to go with it. The final line didn't read as smoothly as the rest but it is a good write.
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This is a clever little write with a very cute little cow picture to go with it. The final line didn't read as smoothly as the rest but it is a good write.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
Comment from donette1914
adorable and so talented!!!
very cute story and your words go well with your poem
very cleaver
you put a lot of thought into this and it shows
the photo complements your work
it was a pleasure
thank you for sharing
I hope the best in the contest
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adorable and so talented!!!
very cute story and your words go well with your poem
very cleaver
you put a lot of thought into this and it shows
the photo complements your work
it was a pleasure
thank you for sharing
I hope the best in the contest
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
Comment from Ben B.
Hahahahah. I'm pretty sure that's not how you milk a cow. That's quite a comic intake on cow encounters. Your reader sure jumped from "patiently" to "begging" fast.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Hahahahah. I'm pretty sure that's not how you milk a cow. That's quite a comic intake on cow encounters. Your reader sure jumped from "patiently" to "begging" fast.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reviewing it.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is awesome writing. I like this. Good example of humour poetry. My way is blocked by a cow I wonder what I should do now. Patiently I pay its head whisper words now moooove I said. ð???cute. Great cartoon photo to match your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This is awesome writing. I like this. Good example of humour poetry. My way is blocked by a cow I wonder what I should do now. Patiently I pay its head whisper words now moooove I said. ð???cute. Great cartoon photo to match your poem.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reviewing it.
Comment from Tessa Kay
I never thought of a mil shake when thinking of moving a cow out of your way. That's so original, and the image it conjures up is really funny. 'Jump your juice' goes well with the picture, though I'm not sure I've ever seen a cow jump. But I'm sure they can, if they want to ;D
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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I never thought of a mil shake when thinking of moving a cow out of your way. That's so original, and the image it conjures up is really funny. 'Jump your juice' goes well with the picture, though I'm not sure I've ever seen a cow jump. But I'm sure they can, if they want to ;D
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I figured a cow could jump, as in 'The cow jumped over the moon" in the Nursery Rhyme, though I might be waiting a while before I get my chocolate milk shake.
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It's a funny mind picture either way :D
