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Cuckoo Ruru

What happens when Micah's little sister meets Mrs. Elliot?

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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You did a good job setting the mood with your setting. I do like your play on words. That is one of my literary techniques. You also did a good job with the graphic imagery. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a horror deluxe entry for the 100 Word Horror writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020
    Thank you!
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 28-Sep-2020
    You're very welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved the essence of this poem and it is terrifying and also has some humour too. I would suggest the last line read: "my darling cat had (caught) a rat" for the sake of meter. I thought this write was inventive and full of promise and for this reason I will give you my vote, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020

Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-word horror poem, The Wailing Banshee, has the necessary word count and leads the reader from the supernatural to the super sickening squashed rat. Gahh!

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020

Comment from Mia Twysted
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I have had mine do that a time or two. I think it is funny how that is them showing us respect and favor. If only they knew how gross it was.

Good luck.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020

Comment from Tina Crute
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Oh my goodness. Gross, but good! This was very entertaining the whole way through. Thanks for sharing such a fun story to read. Good luck in the contest!
Tina

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020

Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written hundred word horror flash fiction. The built up to the end was tense and made the gross ending even preferable to a more sinister ending.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reviewing it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, those nights of 'wild life' and more (wink, wink!)... A wonderful offering for this contest, Mystery Author -- perfect in every way without the gore!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This horror and thriller poem speaks the story of a wailing Banshee, a female spirit, who has done a mischief mysteriously; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020

Comment from oliver818
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I think this is a very good entry for the 100 word horror competition. I like the image you created here, the nasty little rat delivered by the cat is very creepy. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020