Your Romantic Touch
(5-7-5) It doesn't need to be sexy to be soothing.12 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
How cute. How touching. How wonderful that you feel that way. If you watched Victoria you would know and see that she and Albert had a thing with touching. Of course when the only privacy you have is in your bedroom, it is hard to express yourself in the public. Especially when you are the Queen and Prince.
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How cute. How touching. How wonderful that you feel that way. If you watched Victoria you would know and see that she and Albert had a thing with touching. Of course when the only privacy you have is in your bedroom, it is hard to express yourself in the public. Especially when you are the Queen and Prince.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
Comment from jaded831
Romantic and fun, you captured the fun side of romance instead of the deep intense feelings when in a relationship. Your poem is unique I like that. The picture brings it home. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Romantic and fun, you captured the fun side of romance instead of the deep intense feelings when in a relationship. Your poem is unique I like that. The picture brings it home. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your comments!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about romance between lovers that is an intimate connection that only they can experience together in privacy.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about romance between lovers that is an intimate connection that only they can experience together in privacy.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reviewing!
Comment from palmart
Love is a feeling that, sometimes, we don`t feel directly, despite there are many clues that guide us to know that feel is there. Sometimes because one member of the couple is not so communicative and many other reasons. Feet massage is one of those signs that makes you feel the warm hands that help to move energy in your full body, expressing care. Chinese Medicine has studied feet massage and discover long time ago that our full body is represented in our soles and feet. Good poem
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Love is a feeling that, sometimes, we don`t feel directly, despite there are many clues that guide us to know that feel is there. Sometimes because one member of the couple is not so communicative and many other reasons. Feet massage is one of those signs that makes you feel the warm hands that help to move energy in your full body, expressing care. Chinese Medicine has studied feet massage and discover long time ago that our full body is represented in our soles and feet. Good poem
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like the presentation and the topic. Good syllable count and connection between lines. A great entry for the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
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I like the presentation and the topic. Good syllable count and connection between lines. A great entry for the 5-7-5 Romance writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
Comment from Mimi Linny
Ahhh, yes! There is nothing better than a passionate, soothingly-penetrating foot-rub to show someone how much you care! Well said in your 5-7-5 poetry piece on "romance!" Wishing you much luck in the contest!
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Ahhh, yes! There is nothing better than a passionate, soothingly-penetrating foot-rub to show someone how much you care! Well said in your 5-7-5 poetry piece on "romance!" Wishing you much luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
such soothing words. Like the way you wrote your rhyming sentences. There is something to be hold in this poem. Good choice of words, too, besides being so romantic in its own way.
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such soothing words. Like the way you wrote your rhyming sentences. There is something to be hold in this poem. Good choice of words, too, besides being so romantic in its own way.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
Comment from Rashanna Popoola
I like this poem because it shows how the touch of a foot rub could make all the difference to your special someone. This poem is on point. Good work writer!
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I like this poem because it shows how the touch of a foot rub could make all the difference to your special someone. This poem is on point. Good work writer!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a love deluxe entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
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This is a love deluxe entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I wish you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
Comment from donette1914
so sweet and romantic
simply outstanding!!! very cleaver and talented
very thought out
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
well penned poem
very nice words to go with it
I hope for the best in the contest
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so sweet and romantic
simply outstanding!!! very cleaver and talented
very thought out
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
well penned poem
very nice words to go with it
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
