When Words Come To Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 185 "Smitten With Young Love"Easy to read and Easy to understand my poems
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Comment from equestrik
how sweet this picture is and the words you have joined it with. Indeed it looks like the rose bud as well as the young love are beginning to bloom. very nice poem.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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how sweet this picture is and the words you have joined it with. Indeed it looks like the rose bud as well as the young love are beginning to bloom. very nice poem.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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thank you kindly
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
You captured so much in those few words and with only 3 lines to work with. Ah, that first love, none of us can forget - and the picture you chose is absolutely perfect.
Thank you for sharing this poem and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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You captured so much in those few words and with only 3 lines to work with. Ah, that first love, none of us can forget - and the picture you chose is absolutely perfect.
Thank you for sharing this poem and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
Comment from royowen
The youngest age that I ever had a crush was with a little girl across the road from my place, I was seven, as was she, her name was Jean Hughes. We migrated to Australia the next year, I still think of her. So your fabulous post resonated with me. Good luck blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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The youngest age that I ever had a crush was with a little girl across the road from my place, I was seven, as was she, her name was Jean Hughes. We migrated to Australia the next year, I still think of her. So your fabulous post resonated with me. Good luck blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
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Welcome
Comment from RShipp
The beginning's of your poem "smitten" (the beginning of love) and the end of it "beginning to bloom. Perfect bookends!
A great picture choice!
Best of luck in the 3 Line Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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The beginning's of your poem "smitten" (the beginning of love) and the end of it "beginning to bloom. Perfect bookends!
A great picture choice!
Best of luck in the 3 Line Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
Comment from Patty Palmer
Awww This is too precious! How sweet and innocent their friendship is. No complications in their relationship because playing is what connects their friendship! I love the picture too! Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Awww This is too precious! How sweet and innocent their friendship is. No complications in their relationship because playing is what connects their friendship! I love the picture too! Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Sally Law
Donette, a precious offering for the three line poetry contest. Beautifully penned and illustrated in short verse. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs.....
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Donette, a precious offering for the three line poetry contest. Beautifully penned and illustrated in short verse. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs.....
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
Comment from Sanku
A very cute picture . The little ones and their expressions tugged at mu heart's strings. The red rose just above them is a clever touch.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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A very cute picture . The little ones and their expressions tugged at mu heart's strings. The red rose just above them is a clever touch.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
Comment from Eternal Muse
A beautiful entry in the 3 line poetry contest. How adorable are these words - I loved your creative imagery as well your artistic presentation and that lovely artwork.
This should do well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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A beautiful entry in the 3 line poetry contest. How adorable are these words - I loved your creative imagery as well your artistic presentation and that lovely artwork.
This should do well in the contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Donette.
This is a well-written three-line poem telling a story of young love. I remember days like that many many years ago. The picture you used is outstanding. It gives the reader a hint of nostalgia. I am a fan of nostalgia almost as much as I am of ice cream.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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Hello Donette.
This is a well-written three-line poem telling a story of young love. I remember days like that many many years ago. The picture you used is outstanding. It gives the reader a hint of nostalgia. I am a fan of nostalgia almost as much as I am of ice cream.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
This is so sweet and happy. Young love is like a flower unfolding, so fresh and new, and you have depicted that wonderfully. The picture you chose fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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This is so sweet and happy. Young love is like a flower unfolding, so fresh and new, and you have depicted that wonderfully. The picture you chose fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
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thank you