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Comment from equestrik
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how sweet this picture is and the words you have joined it with. Indeed it looks like the rose bud as well as the young love are beginning to bloom. very nice poem.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    thank you kindly
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
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You captured so much in those few words and with only 3 lines to work with. Ah, that first love, none of us can forget - and the picture you chose is absolutely perfect.
Thank you for sharing this poem and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


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    thank you
Comment from royowen
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The youngest age that I ever had a crush was with a little girl across the road from my place, I was seven, as was she, her name was Jean Hughes. We migrated to Australia the next year, I still think of her. So your fabulous post resonated with me. Good luck blessings Roy

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


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    thank you
reply by royowen on 23-Sep-2020
    Welcome
Comment from RShipp
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The beginning's of your poem "smitten" (the beginning of love) and the end of it "beginning to bloom. Perfect bookends!

A great picture choice!

Best of luck in the 3 Line Poetry Contest.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


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    thank you
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Awww This is too precious! How sweet and innocent their friendship is. No complications in their relationship because playing is what connects their friendship! I love the picture too! Great job!
Patty

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


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    thank you
reply by Patty Palmer on 24-Sep-2020
    You're welcome!
    Patty
Comment from Sally Law
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Donette, a precious offering for the three line poetry contest. Beautifully penned and illustrated in short verse. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs.....

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


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Comment from Sanku
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A very cute picture . The little ones and their expressions tugged at mu heart's strings. The red rose just above them is a clever touch.All the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


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Comment from Eternal Muse
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A beautiful entry in the 3 line poetry contest. How adorable are these words - I loved your creative imagery as well your artistic presentation and that lovely artwork.

This should do well in the contest, good luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Donette.

This is a well-written three-line poem telling a story of young love. I remember days like that many many years ago. The picture you used is outstanding. It gives the reader a hint of nostalgia. I am a fan of nostalgia almost as much as I am of ice cream.

Good luck in the contest.

Robert

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020


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reply by Robert Zimmerman on 23-Sep-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
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This is so sweet and happy. Young love is like a flower unfolding, so fresh and new, and you have depicted that wonderfully. The picture you chose fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    thank you