Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You use of alliteration become onomnatopoetic and effects the sounds of the blowing howling wind. The word that stands out is "stuck." It is appropriate that it just sits there. It becomes a metaphor. The reader needs to stop in the cadence. They are stuck. Cool effect. Well thought out.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020

thanks for a great review

Comment from Chelle_GH

Excellent

True to its description, when I read it... There was this feeling of excitement. The author was able to convey the message, it is as if the reader is actually experiencing the fun. I am at a place with only 2 seasons - Summer & Rainy.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Very well made and it reminds us that time of winter fun and dreariness is quickly approaching. Time to get stuck in the snow and brace for the occasional snowball to the face.

A well made entry.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

thank you

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

So true in everything you wrote. Good job with the contest prompt, Mystery Writer. Your rhymes are great choices. I like the art choice, too. Your words flow smoothly to tell of this winter scene.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

thank you

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This will be with us all soon as the snowy season is on the horizon. Let the fun begin as your words here are full of excitement and anticipation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

very pleased that you enjoyed this poem.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I am probably one of the few who does not enjoy a snow day - for the very reasons displayed so entertainingly in your poem: cars get stuck and kids chuck snowballs at me. It always goes down my neck. I liked your poem - I could stay warm and dry reading it.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

lol I'm sorry you get targeted w snowballs. thank you for the review and I'm pleased you like the poem.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! Well, if nothing else, we can dream of cold snow with your offering (it's SO hot here!). But a wonderful Tyburn offering of the winter 'wonderland' (wink, wink) that awaits... :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

thank yo!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Unknown author of Winter Fun
I agree winter I know is can beFun when you do that you listed
for us Fanstorians to read
towing
snowing
throwing
blowing
cars are stuck they're towing, snowing piles
kids rolled snowballs throwing, blowing smile

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

thank you for your review and stars

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Writer,
This is an excellent Tyburn poem with the requirement of the form.
The four "ing" words work well and the two rhymes fit nicely.
Excellent picture to matches.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

thank you Robert.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I am amazed at your use of words here. There is a feel for winter and snow blowing about in your words. I like how you begin your poem with the word "towing". When I think of a snow storm, I think of cars being stuck in the snow. Your poem creates a clear picture of winter which sounds good right now.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

thank you so much, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this. yes winter sounds good right about now.