The Golden Touch
5/7/5 Sensing the divine in nature...15 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of the literary technique of alliteration will draw the reader in. The s's effect the silence and the swishing of the sundried leaves. Inlike many poems that become cautionary tales, this is lovely and uplifting. Well thought out.
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Your use of the literary technique of alliteration will draw the reader in. The s's effect the silence and the swishing of the sundried leaves. Inlike many poems that become cautionary tales, this is lovely and uplifting. Well thought out.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poem, words only' writing prompt.
This lovely piece paints its own picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the '5-7-5 Poem, words only' writing prompt.
This lovely piece paints its own picture.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 5-7-5 poem, words only writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Summer imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the 5-7-5 poem, words only writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Summer imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem is a great entry for the 5-7-5 words only writing prompt. There is truth in a few words. Best of luck in the contest!
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This poem is a great entry for the 5-7-5 words only writing prompt. There is truth in a few words. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from jaded831
You're poem made me feel the warmth of the sunshine as I watch it burn off morning dew. I wake up early in the morning and you captured those moments before day begins. Good luck in the contest.
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You're poem made me feel the warmth of the sunshine as I watch it burn off morning dew. I wake up early in the morning and you captured those moments before day begins. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem with words only you perfectly describe the sunbeams streaming through the leaves with a golden touch over the misty valleys uplifting life.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem with words only you perfectly describe the sunbeams streaming through the leaves with a golden touch over the misty valleys uplifting life.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed reading this poem and the message that reminds us that all Creation speaks of the Creator. Just as we experience the sun's "golden touch," we feel the nearness of God. Best wishes in the contest!
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Enjoyed reading this poem and the message that reminds us that all Creation speaks of the Creator. Just as we experience the sun's "golden touch," we feel the nearness of God. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beams on misty valleys, uplift, divine , life enchanted in sunshine. What a beautiful metaphor :"Sunshine's streaming beams". Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
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Beams on misty valleys, uplift, divine , life enchanted in sunshine. What a beautiful metaphor :"Sunshine's streaming beams". Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I believe that in our best and most connected moments, we can feel the essence of the Creator in His creation. Your lovely poem conveys a powerful message.
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I believe that in our best and most connected moments, we can feel the essence of the Creator in His creation. Your lovely poem conveys a powerful message.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from Fonda Little
My favorite part was, "Sunshine's streaming beams
entwine in misty valleys:", because I could visualize it and that was some pretty strong imagery in my opinion!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Psalm 34:5
New International Version
5 Those who look to him are radiant;
their faces are never covered with shame.
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My favorite part was, "Sunshine's streaming beams
entwine in misty valleys:", because I could visualize it and that was some pretty strong imagery in my opinion!
The Lord led me to this verse after I read this,
Psalm 34:5
New International Version
5 Those who look to him are radiant;
their faces are never covered with shame.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
