Jungle Waterfall
Using the words rain, steam, bellow, song16 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
That piece is very well written. I enjoyed it very much. I'm sure you will do great in the contest. I loved "as in a dream, mist rises like steam". I felt like I was there with you.
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That piece is very well written. I enjoyed it very much. I'm sure you will do great in the contest. I loved "as in a dream, mist rises like steam". I felt like I was there with you.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
Comment from Tina Crute
Great job on this contest entry! Dont know how I missed it!. Your poem is so sensory. I can hear the waterfall and see the mist!
Congratulations on your win!
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Great job on this contest entry! Dont know how I missed it!. Your poem is so sensory. I can hear the waterfall and see the mist!
Congratulations on your win!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
Comment from RShipp
What a beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany you poem-story.
'Vines are entwined' and 'ledge and dangle my feet,' and 'thunderous bellow' ... great descriptive word choices.
Best of luck in the Use These Words writing contest.
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What a beautiful picture you have chosen to accompany you poem-story.
'Vines are entwined' and 'ledge and dangle my feet,' and 'thunderous bellow' ... great descriptive word choices.
Best of luck in the Use These Words writing contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this poem. It is almost like a story within a poem. I should do well as an entry for the Use These Words writing prompt. Good luck in the contest!
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I enjoyed this poem. It is almost like a story within a poem. I should do well as an entry for the Use These Words writing prompt. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a very well written poem that captures the essence and the ecstasy of a primal experience in the heart of a hidden Ecosystem. Oh the joy of entering oneness with the uniqueness of that Jungle Waterfall. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This is a very well written poem that captures the essence and the ecstasy of a primal experience in the heart of a hidden Ecosystem. Oh the joy of entering oneness with the uniqueness of that Jungle Waterfall. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your brilliant review. I'm pleased my poem resonated with you so positively.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You fulfilled the brief here and painted an ambient picture of the jungle, the forest rain, the beauty, bird song and the sparkling green pool, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You fulfilled the brief here and painted an ambient picture of the jungle, the forest rain, the beauty, bird song and the sparkling green pool, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
Comment from Liz O'Neill
One would never know your were composing this lovely scene under mild duress. You had to use random words and came up with what seems very natural as if you just thought of this experience. It is very believable and realistic. Well done. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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One would never know your were composing this lovely scene under mild duress. You had to use random words and came up with what seems very natural as if you just thought of this experience. It is very believable and realistic. Well done. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your kind words and support, Liz.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job in using every word that was required and I liked your use of "bellow" for the tumbling sound of the waterfall. I found the rhyme of sarong with song creative. Best wishes in the contest!
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Great job in using every word that was required and I liked your use of "bellow" for the tumbling sound of the waterfall. I found the rhyme of sarong with song creative. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and use of specific words within the poem describing a forest waterfall and the fun the author had spending time to enjoy the beauty.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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A very well-written poem and use of specific words within the poem describing a forest waterfall and the fun the author had spending time to enjoy the beauty.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review! I wish I could go to this imaginary waterfall.
Comment from equestrik
Your writing here is so peaceful and visual even without the picture that accompanies it. I can almost see the mist and hear the water. This would be a blissful place to hang out for sure!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Your writing here is so peaceful and visual even without the picture that accompanies it. I can almost see the mist and hear the water. This would be a blissful place to hang out for sure!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review! A vacation to this place would be nice.
