The Sun Will Shine
(5/7/5) Optimism about the future, together4 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Short but sweet, very sweet. Beautiful picture also. Wish my husband would have written that to me. :) How about the last line.
And our life is fine. Just saying.
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Short but sweet, very sweet. Beautiful picture also. Wish my husband would have written that to me. :) How about the last line.
And our life is fine. Just saying.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Romance has certainly taken a hit in recent times with the pandemic and our emotions have been kept in check with isolation, I enjoyed your rhymes and sweet sentiments here, you won my vote, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Romance has certainly taken a hit in recent times with the pandemic and our emotions have been kept in check with isolation, I enjoyed your rhymes and sweet sentiments here, you won my vote, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thanks, Dolly. Here's to love!
Comment from Bill Schott
This love 5-7-5,The Sun Will Shine, has the right set up and promises that as long as a bond remains the future, come what may, is going to be alright.
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This love 5-7-5,The Sun Will Shine, has the right set up and promises that as long as a bond remains the future, come what may, is going to be alright.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Nice, simple, rhyming 5-7-5 showing faith in the future and an optimistic view of the outcome. I am glad. Love each other, Each giving strength to the other (hand in hand) and together we walk into tomorrow.
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Nice, simple, rhyming 5-7-5 showing faith in the future and an optimistic view of the outcome. I am glad. Love each other, Each giving strength to the other (hand in hand) and together we walk into tomorrow.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
