Comment from RShipp

Excellent

"Wind fingers my face" What a great first line! You chose a perfect picture for your poem.

Enjoyed the read.

Best of luck with the 5-7-5 poem contest.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review and encouragement.

Comment from J. Dennis

Good

Wind can do many things. As we sit and read or just watch the world go by, we can feel many emotions. We should all give thanks for a lovely moment. Nice job.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020

What might have made this poem better? Appreciate any suggestions.

reply by J. Dennis on 16-Aug-2020

I think that your poem stands well on its own, especially with the lady who is reading.

reply by J. Dennis on 19-Aug-2020

I have just renewed my membership here. I see some different styles.
I would like to write you later when I have looked at more poems. This was a good poem.

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2020

Please feel free to do so.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Not sure why you labeled it a disturbing wind. I pictured more od a breeze on a hot day than something disturbing. Very Nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020

Caused the reader to look up from his book. Thanks for the read, review and the comments

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Feeling a cool breeze in the summer heat is refreshing and stops us in our tracks as we enjoy the feeling. My fans are on constantly to create a breeze in my house! Much enjoyed, ambient write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2020

Thank you, Dolly, for your read and comments, and enjoy your breeze.