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Indecisiveness

Life's confusing questions

4 total reviews 
Comment from Martha McDaniel
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I would of like to seen more detail about the person. I see the issues, but what makes this person lost for words. why does this person think that lost for word makes them not perfect?

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2020
    Thank you for such an informed review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Nicely done! I like how you take us in between the extremes of black and white, Yes and No and the anxiety about the consequences which make decision-making so difficult! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2020

Comment from mauial
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Good take on the prompt. We get the point that making a decision can be tough, especially if it can change your life. Take moving the family to another city or country. I liked your monorhyme scheme also.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    Thanks for your kind review Mauial.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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A very nice rhymed poem which fits in the topic of the contest perfectly. I like the philosophy of these lines. I especially liked the pun in the first line: "Black and white always have gray."

A nice picture by Renate-Bertodi. I wish you luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much Eternal Muse for your kind review.