In a Painted Sky
5-7-5 The changing colours of a sunrise14 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem made me feel peaceful. The words flowed and reminded me there is still beauty in this life. A powerful poem. Your picture compliments your words. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
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Your poem made me feel peaceful. The words flowed and reminded me there is still beauty in this life. A powerful poem. Your picture compliments your words. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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Your poem is unique and creative. I hope it does well as an entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good luck in the contest!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! No mistakes found. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You described a fine sunrise here filled with a beautiful colourful glow, a painter's delightful palette brought to life with your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You described a fine sunrise here filled with a beautiful colourful glow, a painter's delightful palette brought to life with your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is good work. It does indeed look like a painted sky. You've captured it beautifully with your very descriptive, colorful, and well placed words. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
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This is good work. It does indeed look like a painted sky. You've captured it beautifully with your very descriptive, colorful, and well placed words. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Super use of alliteration! Enjoyed the "daubed at dawn:" and "blush-brushed in beauty." Also nice assonance in every line! Lovely picture, too! Best wishes in the contest!
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Super use of alliteration! Enjoyed the "daubed at dawn:" and "blush-brushed in beauty." Also nice assonance in every line! Lovely picture, too! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Great entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines with a nice flow. Good presentation.
I like the theme about sunrise...great imagery.
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Hello my friend
Great entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines with a nice flow. Good presentation.
I like the theme about sunrise...great imagery.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
Comment from ameen786
Lisa my friend, this is a beauty; If there's any haiku that can be stimulating then, this is it; the picture with your superb alliteration and eloquent wordings makes this a radiant poem; I'll be surprised if this is not a winner.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Lisa my friend, this is a beauty; If there's any haiku that can be stimulating then, this is it; the picture with your superb alliteration and eloquent wordings makes this a radiant poem; I'll be surprised if this is not a winner.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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You've made my day with your wonderful review! I think of scenery in terms of art and painting.
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words that paint a picture of the various colors in the sky, I have seen these colors at dusk. You created a haiku that shows a scene of nature. "Blush-brushed in beauty" is a perfect last line.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Excellent use of words that paint a picture of the various colors in the sky, I have seen these colors at dusk. You created a haiku that shows a scene of nature. "Blush-brushed in beauty" is a perfect last line.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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I am an artist so i tend to think in terms of art when looking at scenes. Thanks for your lovely review.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautifully painted image with excellent words. The dawn's always inspiring one of the best poems. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Beautifully painted image with excellent words. The dawn's always inspiring one of the best poems. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review. I love being outside at dawn or sunset.
