State of unrest.
A comamentary on our country3 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
This is an interesting take on the current situation. I'd be more afraid of a dictator than a nanny personally.
I found a couple of little mistakes.
conflick- conflict
our govermentleaders- leave a gap between government and leaders.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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This is an interesting take on the current situation. I'd be more afraid of a dictator than a nanny personally.
I found a couple of little mistakes.
conflick- conflict
our govermentleaders- leave a gap between government and leaders.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 04-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2020
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thanks Oliver,for a good review,there was some mistakes, I have grammarly they are supposed to help but yhey never showed up, I wrote this peace back in June, just held on to it,sorry about the mistakes
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What's going on in your country is rather unsettling John and I feel your fear here in your write, you have one or two spelling errors, (unanswered), (conflict), (government). Just go back into the post to make the adjustments. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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What's going on in your country is rather unsettling John and I feel your fear here in your write, you have one or two spelling errors, (unanswered), (conflict), (government). Just go back into the post to make the adjustments. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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thank you very much Dolly, as I was writing this I was a little worried, that might go off the rails, I am sorry about the spelling, but I pay good money for the spell check,thank you again.
Comment from Eternal Muse
You described a real state of unrest in this country. Politicians, the media, the pandemic that is eating the world alive, great descriptive imagery and visuals.
We have become a nanny state,
soon we will not reconize,
our self.
If the past is detroyed,
so are we.
I see the future coming,
at me like a speeding bullet.
The words "recognized" and "destroyed" are misspelled. You may want to put the whole thing through a spellcheck.
A like the topic and the execution.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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You described a real state of unrest in this country. Politicians, the media, the pandemic that is eating the world alive, great descriptive imagery and visuals.
We have become a nanny state,
soon we will not reconize,
our self.
If the past is detroyed,
so are we.
I see the future coming,
at me like a speeding bullet.
The words "recognized" and "destroyed" are misspelled. You may want to put the whole thing through a spellcheck.
A like the topic and the execution.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2020
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thank you so much, for a great review,I'm sorry about the spelling,I pay 140 dollars, grammarly, could not find them today. I have had this peace for a month,I think I was a little worried about it,
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There is a spellcheck here on FS, it's in every work you write, you have the option of using it before you click "submit."
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thanks for the heads up, I have grammarly,something went wrong today.
