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Silence Is Golden

(60 words) It might tickle his fancy.

17 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is excellent. A really good candidate for the sixty word dash writing contest. It is an amusing, well-crafted story, that holds together well in the exrremely short space allowed. The unexpected end is a dream.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for this very complimentary review.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This sixty-word story, Silence is Golden, has the required word count and sees the decision-making process of creature welfare versus belly laugh.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    Hmmm... decisions decisions.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this made me smile and our decisions are influenced by our mood and here poor Peter is about to scream, a fun write and you entertained me, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    Fun at other people's discomfort can be delicious, especially if they deserve it.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Oops a lizard, I will die of fear, I think it's a bad joke to not tell a friend about it:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    Thanks for reviewing. (He deserved it. The lizard would only tickle, not bite.)
Comment from Raul1
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This is a very funny and hilarious poem. It made me laugh all the way to the end. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! I like it. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    Thanks for reviewing;. i'm pleased it entertained you.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! I guess Peter would regret the argument now. Hope it's not venomous. Now wonder what the dynamics would have been if the critter crawled up Julia's swimsuit. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
    I think Peter would have told julia, hoping she would tear off her swimsuit!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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You kept the reader in suspense til the end. But the sadistic grin drew the reader in to wonder who or what was going to get hurt. They didn't want the lizard to get hurt. They didn't even consider the final plot.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

Comment from Patty Palmer
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Cute story for the contest! To tell or not to tell, that is the question. I would be too interested to see what happens when Peter feels the lizard crawling up his leg. Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

LOL this is so cute... the best one! I can imagine what comes next.

Excellent entry for the 60 WORD DASH writing prompt contest. Good word count. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is an interesting entry for the 60 WORD DASH writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2020